tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6719349258866182415.post262784101655801992..comments2024-03-02T02:36:14.485-06:00Comments on Have dice, will travel...: [ Kinship ] Room FourZanazazhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04980968371007703230noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6719349258866182415.post-25589789932750427232011-10-03T02:53:38.140-05:002011-10-03T02:53:38.140-05:00Thanks guys. I guess I'm achieving the effect...Thanks guys. I guess I'm achieving the effect I want. I had a lot more stuff brewing, but I didn't want the post too long. Expect to see more of Mac and Monkey in the future. I really like these guys, and they are going to become NPCs in the book.Zanazazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04980968371007703230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6719349258866182415.post-77218903588882457942011-10-02T14:27:42.688-05:002011-10-02T14:27:42.688-05:00Not only do you have the atmosphere going on, but ...Not only do you have the atmosphere going on, but the sound effects too (I am not going to use 'onomatopoeia' just to tick off my old teachers) and I must say a nice cliffhanger.Skimboshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058602884962010095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6719349258866182415.post-25535261879612433732011-10-02T07:19:04.852-05:002011-10-02T07:19:04.852-05:00I hope so. The weird here seems almost tame, but t...I hope so. The weird here seems almost tame, but there's a feeling crazy things could happen. Great onomatopoeia with the machines too - the machines feel very real, if very strange...Porkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00604351052444947490noreply@blogger.com